*Film Analysis*

Movie: THE LAST SONG
Ordinary World- Girl named Ronnie moves to a new town to live with her dad. She hates it and becomes even more rebelous then before. "Stop smiling dad, it's creeping me out."
Call to Adventrue- She meets a boy named Will and suprisingly he seems pretty interested... is she going to let herself fall for him? He's not even really her type. Handsome, athlete, genuine, giving... usually she likes the bad boys. "Wow... I hardly recognized you without your shirt on pretty boy."
Refusal of the Call- But Will is persistant! Yet Ronnie keeps her distance from him. "Your different Ronnie... in a good way."
Meeting the Mentor-Ronnie is kind of Ronnie's own mentor in a sense
Crossing the Threshold-
Tests, Allies, and Enemies- While Ronnie was in her "rebelous" stage she befriended the wrong kind of people. Blaze was her so-called "friend" who framed her for robbery. That entire group of friends makes Ronnie's life really difficult and give her a hard time. "We want you Ronnie... but for all the wrong reasons."
Approach the Inmost Cave- Ronnie decides to turn her life around. She lends Blaze money to pay for her rent, she starts hanging out with her dad and brother more often, and she starts being more kind and gentle towards Will. She becomes rocking girlfriend material. "Whatever you do with the money Blaze, I hope you're smart with it."
The Ordeal- There are SOOOO many ordeals in this movie. It's a constant tear fest! Will's parents don't like Ronnie, she has bad friends, and so on and on and on. But probably the biggest ordeal is when she finds out that her dad is dying of cancer. It hits Ronnie and her brother really hard. She regrets not spending more time with him during the summer but intends on making it up with the time he's got left. During this time Ronnie and Will also break up. It's a rough time for the poor girl! :(
Reward- Once she starts spending more time with her dad that's the reward itself! She finally has a real and powerful bond with him.
Road Back- The funeral is what brings her back. It brings her back to old memories, good times and hobbies. When Ronnie was a child she was upset with her dad for leaving her mom. To get revenge on him she stops her heaven-sent gift which was the piano BUT on her road back she ends up playing at his funeral. She has a piece of him that can be with her forever now.  
Resurrection- I feel like Ronnie's father is resurrected in a sense when his masterpiece of a stained glass window gets put up in the chuch. Ronnie is also resurrected when she becomes herself again and lets go of all her anger.
Return with Elixir- Will ends up coming to the funeral. They hadn't spoken since the break-up but love NEVER FAILS! So naturally they get back together, grieve for  a while, then end up living happily ever after. PRECIOUS!

*50 Word Story*

Sk8er Boi
He was a boy. She was a girl. It was obvious they loved each other but the girl was too worried about his social status. So she blew him off; only for him to become a famous singer! She wants him, gets him back, they ROCK EACH OTHERS WORLD FOREVER! :)

BlUrBs.

1.) She's In love with the Boy
Britnee's dad doens't like her boyfriend; now that's a big problem because she's in love with him! She begins to rebel to be with him. Her mommy makes her dad realize that no matter what he thinks, she will be with him so it's better that he just learn to love him too! AWE! :)

2.) Who made you King of Anything
Britnee's boyfriend just broke up with her. She's upset, hurt, she feels betrayed and most of all upset upset upset! HOW COULD HE DO THAT TO HER? He's starting to treat her differently; like he's better than she is. Oh, he's not! She shows him that he doesn't own her... he doesn't own ANYTHING!

3.) Teenage Dream
Britnee's in LOVE AGAIN! Her boyfriend makes her feel like a princess. She's been dreaming about this kind of love since she was a little girl! Find a boy, perfect boy, then fall in love and live happily ever after. No problems! He is part of her teenage dream which is now a reality.

4.) Dont' take the Girl
Britnee's next door neighbor Tommy is SOOOO cute, but he doens't like her. :( Ever since they were little she's tried to win his heart with fishing trips, and coming over to his house CONSTANTLY. But she will prevail! When they become teenagers he finally realizes how amazing and fabulous she is and they date, grow up, and get married. Once they get old; Tommy realizes that he can't let her go.

5.) When you wish upon a Star
Stars love to be wished on; which is perfect because Britnee loves wishing on them! She learns that no matter who wishes or what they wish for it can always come true if you have pure intent. Magic is real and your dreams can ALWAYS become a reality. SOOO CUTE! :)

SIX WORD MOMOIRS

6. The sun will come out tomorrow.
6. Where'd all the good people go?
6. Life with you makes perfect sense.
6. The dog jumped over the log.
6. Sometimes silence is better than words.
6. Dance like no one's watching you.
6. I do not deserve all this!
6. You can light up the dark.
6. She thinks my tractor's sexy.
6. Trying to find my way back...

She's In love with the Boy!

<3 Characters: Katie, chickens, Tommy, Daddy, Mommy, hay-seed plow boy, Mommy's-daddy
<3 Setting: Front Porch, town, over yonder, road, Tastee Freeze, very last row, walk, Katies room
<3 Theme: Date whoever you are in love with REGAURDLESS and eventually things will turn out just right.
<3 Plot: Katie and Tommy are dating and her dad doesn't like it but mom convinces him that it's fine.
<3 Conflict: Katie's dad doesn't like her boyfriend Tommy. He thinks Katie is too good for him.

Impulse... the second, the better, the bestest!

Bob- You really shouldn't be doing this.
Nancy- Oh shut up Bob, can't you see I'm living my life?
Bob- You're gonna regret it. I can promise ya that.
Nancy- Listen here. Just because you have become a fat lazy old man doesn't mean you have the right to tell me what do to anymore... and that's why I'm leaving.
Bob- You'll be back. You always come back.
Nancy- I want us to have a future together! But you're too concerned about that couch. If I didn't know any better I'd say you were in love with it!
Bob- So...
Nancy- UGHHHH! I've had enough! My mother was right. We're through. Don't try to stop me Bob. I'M LEAVING!
Bob- Do you know where the remote is?
Nancy- I hate you.

da B.E.A.T.

Action: Little girl just went to the zoo with her mom and saw a tiger and wanted to take it home REALLY REALLY BADLY!

Conflict: As is to be predicted... her mom said no.

Event: Even though she cried and cried and cried her mom still said no AND she didn't even let her get an ice cream cone on the way home as her punishment.

Changes: I think that little girl's mom should be like a "hippie-free spirit" kind of freak and let her daughter take the tiger home to save it from man's evil cages and the tiger ends up becoming a beloved family pet and they become rich from all the preformances they host.

THE... impulse

1- Hey...
2-  Wow, you look tired.
1- It's been a long day.
2- Oh I'm sorry.
1- Ya no BD.
2- Wanna talk about it?
1- It's just cramps
2- UGH! That's the absolute worst!
1- It's fine though, I have my chocolate supply with me, I'll be fine.
2- Can I have some?
1- No! Get your own chocolate when you have your own cramps!
2- Ugh. That's so rude.
1- Well... I'm sorry.
2. Well... I'll see you and your attititude later then.
1- Don't give me sass.
2- Listen, I'll sass when I'm feeling sassy.
1- Alright... WHAT EVEEEEER.

Roses are red... Violets are blue (BAAAAAAAAAAAD WRITING)

Roses are red,
Violets should be pink
I really do suck
at writing poems I think.
I cry myself to sleep at night,
I cry myself to sleep at night,
I cry myself to sleep at night,
when I think about our first fight.
The sky is really blue today,
Horses and cows love to eat hay,
My least favorite month is the month of May,
Hear Fat Albert scream, hey hey hey!
The flower's beauty is like unto a rose whose petals were kissed by the sun each morning at then laid down to sleep at night the stars acting as a sheet.
I gaze into the horizon and picture my life as clearly as the waters of the ocean right after the waves of a hurricane did beat.
Mr. Nelson makes us write bad poems,
can i do that? Oh let me just show-'em..s
how bad I really can be
who knew it was true?
This poem sucks so bad my face is literally turning blue.

DIRECT ORDER

You have been given a direct order to ROCK out. Rock out like you're Mick Jagger and your soul purpose in life is to do so. Rock out like you're having a seizure or your mom just made cinnimon rolls and you just relized it's general conference weekend. NO CHURCH! :) Rock out like you just made the perfect cheesecake. Rock out like you just ATE that very cheesecake. Rock out like you're with all your girls and a group of male, European models just got seated by you at the resturant and need directions and dates to the nearest party. Rock out like you just got invited to Taylor Laugtner's eighteenth bash. and yes... you are his date! Rock out like you have hair down to your butt which is there specifically for rockin. Rock out like you're the only person alive. Rock out like you would if you were dressed like KISS. Rock out like you would if you WERE KISS. Rock out like you just got a text from the love of your life saying he's been blinded all these years not knowing how perfect you are for each other. Yah... that'd be a big fat ROCK out.

ShAkE tHe DuSt

This is for the construction workers,
for the fat girls,
Shake the dust and be who you are because everybody else is already taken.
This is for the retired football star
and for the broken hearted
This is for the corner and the girl who sits in it whose ONLY proof of existance is her name on the roll.
This is for the lonely hallways filled with lonely people how are constantly surrounded by others but are still considered "loners"
Shake the dust. Look rejection in the face and laugh because you're not afraid of it.
This is for the betrayed mother
This is for the children who watched their mother be betrayed by their own father and don't know which side they're on.
This is for the abandoned puppy
and for the star that no one has ever wished apon.
This one's for you.
Every person who has ever doubted you, every english assignment that has stared at you with arrogent eyes assuming you can't do it, every person who was there, hurt you, and now is gone, is going to feel ashamed when you shake the dust becasue once you do your true self will be revealed.
And they won't know how they didn't see it before.

I'm thinking about you...

I'm thinking about you like a baby thinks about her blanket...

Comfort? Mental stability? Warmth? So many theories about why a little baby girl would cry out in the night for a mere blanket. Whatever the reason. This is how I think you. Constantly. In the back of my mind I am always thinking to myself. Where is my blanket? Why isn't my blanket here with me now? I need my blanket to be wrapped around me giving me the reassurance that everything is going to be alright. I'm thinking about my blanket becasue my blanket is always with me. We've been through everything from sickness, to tears. But not only that; my blanket is my best friend! The first one to know all my secrets. My blanket is always there so it's only fitting that my blanket should know everything. My blanket is my protection. When something happens that makes a little girl feel hurt, alone, afriad, or sad; she grabs her blanket to protect her from the world. The blanket is her's to cry on. I don't know what I would do without my blanket.

Love is...

<3 Love is a hand looking for a partner to hold.
<3 Love is a bullet searching for hearts to wound.
<3 Love is a sunrise with endless possibilities to what lays ahead.
<3 Love is a puppy; eager to play.
<3 Love is a river that flows so quickly that it's almost dangerous.
<3 Love is a blanket warming the body of a newborn baby.
<3 Love is math, very difficult to understand, but once understood is shown to be absolutely necessary.
<3 Love is a rainbow; coming after a very large and difficult rainstrom showing that it was all worth it.
<3 Love is like the little stream. It just keeps on giving.
<3 Love is a pearl taking years and years of pressure and hardships to make it beautiful and perfect.

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The life of Peter...(Me)

Everything that i post on this blog is going to be difficult to be kept anonymous. Things that I do define me. I am known for being what I am seen doing. Most people don't know that I have hidden talents too. I've always loved music. Not just Lady Gaga, (although I do have a deep obsession with her music ABSOLUTELY!) I love classical music. Most people don't appreciate classical music only the way that a musician can. My mom has forced me to play the violin all my life. Only recently did I actually start to ENJOY this instrument that, in my childhood, was the source of all my misery! I also love country music. Nothing is more sexy then Brad Paisley when he sings and plays the guitar. His, and all country artists really have a soft spot in my heart from the time I was a little girl. Country is Daddy's music to me. He always found a meaning from every song he listened to. Even if it's a song as worthless as, "She thinks my Tractor's sexy." Even though that song is one of my absolute favorites. :)
I took this class for a few reasons. Number one, I heard Mr. Nelson takes school and actually makes it ENJOYABLE! WHO KNEW IT WAS POSSIBLE!? I am also taking this class because believe it or not, I love to write. Writing in a sense, is like music. It's basically just self expression. What is better then getting to say what you want, when you want, why you want, and about what you want? Nothing. I really am excited about this blog as well. No one will ever know who the real "Peter Piper" is. :) Pretty mysterious stuff. I'm going to love it!